Thursday, 13 March 2014

Feedback on first draft of music video

Proficient/Excellent:
  • Holding a shot steady, where appropriate; minimal, basic, proficient, excellent
  • Framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate; minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
  • Using a variety of shot distances as appropriate; minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
  • Shooting material appropriate for task set;  minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
  • Selecting mise-en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting;  minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
  • Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer; minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
  • Using varied shot transitions, captions, and other effects selectively and appropriately; minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
  • Using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task; minimal/basic/proficient/excellent
Comments:
  • Your product has lots of potential, it reflects your genre very well
  • I love your performance elements, locations and costume choice
  • You have some very good cinematography in the video and the location is fantastic
  • You have some good hand held camera but need a little less of it
  • We have discussed the areas you need to change. Your product is very well thought out and put together and could be excellent with the changes discussed made

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